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My Essential Nothingness by ~Pagan-Saint:iconPagan-Saint:





You are my gem of depression, the star of darkness in my life. I stare into your blackened eyes, and fall into an eternal darkness. I still remember the fire that used to burn inside your heart, now quenched by the ice that penetrates deep within you. Your hands are cold, and your lips feel like snow upon mine. I felt the last beats of your heart with the palm of my hand, yet I can't give you up, I need you still, you have another part to play in my life. I lay my head on your breast, and lay my arm across your waist, my love has to bring you back, I know it isn't your time. My tears fall from my cheek to your once perfect body, now defiled and wasted. How can someone who cared about the world, and me, so much, be ripped from my grasp before I had the chance to explain how much I loved you, now you will never know. I would gladly exchange my life for yours, and I would spend eternity in torment to have just one last moment with you. I gave my innocence to you, and I accepted yours in return, I thought that it would last forever, but our time has been cruelly cut short. I cry for the times gone by, and I cry for those that will no longer happen. I need you in my life, why do you leave me to live this hell all alone, you can't do this to me, yet you have no say in your actions. I am a shell without you. Fate fell short, it failed.
Good-bye my dearest one, I love you!
©2004-2008 ~Pagan-Saint
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Submitted: January 11, 2004
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I don't know how to descibe it, but even though it is mine so I'm biased, I love this one. I hope you do too.

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~elektrix:iconelektrix: Mar 1, 2004, 9:04:23 PM
Very heart wrenching. Makes the hairs at the back of my neck stand up (that's a compliment!)
~Pagan-Saint:iconPagan-Saint: Mar 6, 2004, 5:47:17 PM
Thanks for the comment, you're actually the first person who's written anything about it. I've read through you're poems aswell, I like them (I think I read bubbles when you first posted it), I like them. I envy you, I find it so hard to write in verses, i just blurt it all out into one big paragraph.
~elektrix:iconelektrix: Mar 8, 2004, 10:38:06 PM
Don't think I'm some great poetess. I actually thought of Bubbles one day when I was half asleep and it had to do something with a dream I had just had. BUt thank's for the comment! ^_^
~TheGoodWitch:iconTheGoodWitch: Apr 7, 2004, 7:57:50 AM
Eh, I just can't take the sadness :tears:
I like this poem!